Monday, 12 October 2009

Shot List

We produced a storyboard prior to creating the shot list. After creating the third draft of the storyboard the group felt as if they had created a polished list of the shots we would like to take during filming. We then added detail and put these on the storyboard. That detail has been stripped of this shot list so that it conforms simply to the shots we need to film.


  1. Black screen - inserted during editing, no filming necessary.
  2. "Whatever Productions", title slide, inserted during editing, no filming necessary.
  3. A Mid-Long Shot of the three girls from behind, a man or shadow of a man should be seen in the foreground.
  4. A secondary mid-long shot that is similar in everything except the proximity of characters. Diagetic sound to be recorded on set of laughter.
  5. A three-quarters shot of the girls, however looking at them from the front. We will hear low level in-scene sound of whispering, we won't be able to hear this. It will be heavily shadowed.
  6. A Mid-Shot of two girls (cut off one) dialogue from diagetic but also hear other girl in scene (non-diagetic)
  7. Mid-Close up shot of singular character, sound as before.
  8. Black screen - inserted during editing, no filming necessary.
  9. Black screen - inserted during editing, no filming necessary. There will also be a scream, we'll record this afterwards.
  10. "Holly Keane", title slide, inserted during editing, no filming necessary.
  11. A Close-Up establisher, side of lead's face. Must be shadowy.
  12. Big-Close Up from front looking up into lead face, if possible we would film this with her running on the spot. It would have to be very shadowy overhead to achieve the desired result here though
  13. "Hannah Jones, Fhahima Hussian", title slide, inserted during editing, no filming necessary.
  14. Close-up of erratic running feet. It doesn't matter whose this is.
  15. Continue with feet at close-up, slightly different angle, the feet stop here.
  16. Continuation of 15/16, similar to 15 with close-up of feet however opposite direction.
  17. Mid-Close Up of a path.
  18. Mid-Close Up of a path and character running into left hand side.
  19. Mid-Close Up of a path and character passing through, middle of scene here.
  20. Mid-Close Up of a path. (Character left)
  21. A mid-shot of character looking up from feet, the remainder of the body will be in view.
  22. A mid-shot of the feet of the character.
  23. A mid-shot of the torso/chest of character.
  24. A mid-shot of the characters face, a pan and swivel into this shot.
  25. A very-close up could be achieved here by entering closer to the scene. We are unsure whether to currently include this shot as it is unclear how we could achieve it well.
  26. A big-close up of the face will be in shot with a hand reaching out to touch it.
  27. The hand will be removed and a final big-close up shot will establish the remainder of the film.
  28. Black screen - inserted during editing, no filming necessary.
  29. "Abandoned", title slide, inserted during editing, no filming necessary.

Tuesday, 6 October 2009

Production Plan

We have decided to film in chronological order. This makes the most sense because Holly appearance will change over time according to the order through the storyboard.

We are going to film on set over the period of one evening. We have planned this in the hope that the weather will be okay and dependent on the time that the sun sets. We would like to film from 17:00 - 19:00 on the days to create an eiree effect and to ensure that the correct filming light conditions are in place. If, for any reason, i.e weather,  we can't complete filming on the Thursday, we are taking Friday as a 'back-up' day.

We have decided on a location as a small woods. For practical reasons the wood is fairly quiet.  For atmospheric reasoning the woods is very isolated and can be used to create a feeling of being lost.

We have previously outlined the props that we need to collect and have assigned roles for each person to collect specific props. We have made arrangements to have both a camera and tripod over our shooting days. The storyboard will be on set when were filming and we are going to ensure that we have several copies. This is to ensure that the crew and cast are co-ordinated in filming and the roles are understood. We've made a plan to record our sound effect - Holly singing. We are going to do this a week prior to filming on the Friday.

More Inspiration...

We have looked at yet more films to find some final inspiration for our shots. One of the films that heavily relates to the style and synopsis of our opening sequence is 'Dead Wood'.

They use the ideas of a group of friends and a mysterious stranger. The circumstances surrounding this film are very similar to ours and has given us some good ideas for what we would like to add to our shot list.



Towards the end of the trailer you see much faster shots - something that we are very interested in bringing into our opening sequence because it shows the dramatic increase in tension. Another point that's interesting is some of the sequences such as the flickering torch and the quick shots of the villain. The obvious conventions of  thriller film are used in perfect context to the way that we would like to use them.

Saturday, 3 October 2009

Target Audience

'Abandoned' is a teenage thriller, we decided on this category for many reasons.  Firstly, many of the characters within the film are teenagers themselves creating a more adolescent enviroment, which may be more appealing to younger adults.  They can relate to the scenes in which the characters appear in, allowing them to create opinions and feelings toward characters.  The main focus for a film is to appeal to their target audience, as this is the key to failure or success.  We must ensure the content of the film is interesting and overall enjoyable to the audience in focus. 
We chose to brand the film 15, this is because we thought the content was too mature for anyone younger, we believe anyone less than 15 may find it hard to understand and relate to the scenes, they also might be disturbed by some of the images and ideas. However we didn't want to make it 18 because we thought we may miss out on a huge potential audience, and we did not believe it was necessary.

Friday, 2 October 2009

Props

In order to create and produce an opening of a thriller film, to make it a success we have to include certain conventions, including props. We as a group came up with a variety of props to include in the Mise-en-scene to create the whole thriller theme.

These include;

Torches (F) - Creating shadows which create the mysterious and spooky feel, and is also an artificial light which will stand out amongst the dark woods during the night.
Fake Blood  (Hj) - Is a typical convention used for a thriller, yet works very effectively making the audience gringe in horror.
Beer Cans - (J) To create the party scene in which the girls are involved in.
Shoe - (Hk) A random shoe to show the audience a sign of escape.
Camp Fire  (N/A) -To create the whole camp atmosphere which takes place in the woods.
Costumes - (A) Casual teenage clothes, to show a sense of reality in the girls.
CD Player - (Hk) Instead of editing and attaching the music in the background, we decided that playing music in the scenes will create the more realistic sense of atmosphere i.e. hip-hop and heavy rock.

Note: Key to who's bringing what:

  • Hk - Holly Keane
  • Hj - Hannah Jones
  • F - Fhahima Hussain
  • A - All
  • J - Jakob Lewis


Thursday, 1 October 2009

The Storyboard

The storyboard was created by hand, using the ideas dreamt up by the group. The opening sequence has 30 frames including titles.

The originals of the storyboard were created, with a quick sketch of one page outlining the main ideas behind what we would like to achieve in the opening sequence.



After this we took the development of the storyboard a step further; we developed five pages of 30 shots in which the ideas were outlined more thoroughly.












We are currently working on a more developed version of this storyboard, hopefully this will further develop the efforts made here and make the final outcome easier to use when filming.

Tuesday, 29 September 2009

Music

A stong feature of our opening sequence was the music and noise effects. We believe this contributes considerably to a thrilling atmosphere and we wanted to get it perfect. We had to create our own music, this was a challenge at first, we began by drafting some ideas and eventually came to an interesting and natural solution. We decided on using a young girls voice humming to a tune, this reinforced our idea of the villan being childlike and also gave an eerily sweet tone to the scene. This is very much unlike many other films of the same genre but we thought the sweet humming of a child would contradict with the haunting scenes, giving an intriguing twist. This is known as the digetic element of sound as it is clearly not from the original scene.
For our non digectic sounds we have many ideas, these include panting, running footsteps, screams and a heartbeat. Firstly the panting insinuates someone is in panic or worn out, this emphaizes the terror and effort the chractors have gone through. This is also true to the heartbeat and running footsteps. The Screams show terror and shock, this will add to the terrifying atmosphere giving a shock factor to audience. All these sounds are easy to obtain and can be done by us in the classroom.